Spin Spin Sugar

Simone’s Notes:

What is temptation? It is an act that looks appealing to an individual. It is usually used to describe acts with negative connotations and as such, tends to lead a person to regret such actions, for various reasons: legal, social, psychological, health, economic, etc. Temptation also describes the coaxing or inducing a person into committing such an act, by manipulation or otherwise of curiosity, desire or fear of loss. But is temptation really all that bad? It could be used as a necessary evil to test our self-control in life. The trick is resisting it. But that’s not always easy to do.

“Excuse me,” a voice spoke up. Edward quickly looked up from his stress and despair. A young girl was standing in front of him. She looked about eighteen years old with her jet black hair in a short boyish cut. Her make-up was done lightly and decently. The girl had the body perfectly with a nice looking rack and ass. Her legs were slender with thick thighs. Her black and white short skirt drew attention to her hips and small waist. Her cranberry halter top drew attention to her heavy set and flat midriff. She looked concerned at him. “Is there a problem?” the girl asked in a sweet Liverpool accent.

Edward couldn’t take his eyes off of her. She was just that hot! He wanted to do so many things to her fine little body. The girl kept eyeing him as if he was a little slow. “Hello?” the girl asked with a smile on her face. “Is there anybody in there?” The alchemist quickly came back to Earth. “Uh… yes?” he asked. The girl smiled at him again. “Do you how to get the Maple Gaming Club from here?” she asked. “You see, my friends invited me out to there and I lost my directions. I think they even went on ahead of me while I was taking a nap.” Ed’s face lit up in a flash. He was instantly attracted to this English beauty. All of a sudden he wanted to do her! Here’s your chance to take your mind off of that hooker! Don’t screw this up! The host nodded as he rose to his feet and walked over to her. “Sure!” he called boldly. “In fact, I’ll take you there myself!” The girl’s eyes lit up brightly. “Great!” she called. “I was going to flip if I missed the opening day!” Her smile made her even sexier. Then Ed stepped ahead of her. “Ready to go?” he asked. “Yes sir!” she exclaimed. The alchemist smiled at her like a charming boy. “Just call me Edward,” he replied. “I’m Kelli.” the girl said back. “Okay, let’s go!” Ed responded. Then, the pair handed down the road on their destination.

At St. Mary’s Touch, Falman came in with a bouquet of white roses for Nurse Morrison. The man just had to see her again. At long last, the warrant officer held fallen for the nurse. They had been on a couple of dates together for the past three weeks, but nothing had happened. The farthest they had gone was her hand on his knee. It took her a while to draw him to her, but it was worth it. Izzie was beginning to lose patience and was tempted to make the first bold move on her man. Now, the games were *really* to begin! Vato had yet to learn that he was in a competition for Izzie’s heart and hot body. Falman had come up to the nurse’s station when he noticed Isaac there with a bouquet of roses in his hands. At first, Vato thought nothing about him. Isaac turned to him smiling. “Here to visit someone, sir?” he asked Falman. “Yeah,” the soon-to-be-rival answered. “You too?” “Yep!” Isaac replied. Things seemed innocent so far. But little did they know that they were visiting the same person. The men thought that the other was visiting a dear friend.

Then, Izzie came out to the front desk from Jaks’s office. She looking like a hot model just like usual. Her long blonde hair was back in a ponytail today. Her light blue uniform was neatly pressed to show off her curves. Both men handed their roses forward. “Here Izzie-chan!!!” they both exclaimed. The nurse’s eyes grew big in shock. “Oh my!” she exclaimed happily. “This is so nice! You shouldn’t have!” Both men glared at each other coldly. “What the hell do you think you are doing?” Falman asked Isaac harshly. “I could ask you the same thing, pal!” his rival barked back. Izzie cleared her throat. Vato and Isaac turned to her. The nurse smiled at them sweetly. “Oh good!” she called. “You two have met each other! Vato, this is Isaac Riis. Isaac, this is Warrant Officer Vato Falman.” Both men looked like they wanted to kill each other. “Come on, now!” the nurse called out. “Just shake hands and be gentlemen about it.” Her knights set down the flowers and reluctantly shook hands. Izzie smiled at them like an angel. “There,” she said. “You two know each other, now we can all be ‘friends.’” Then, she took the lovely flowers and went back to work. The nurse smiled to herself as she left. “I can’t wait to see what they pull to get me to notice them!” she thought like a naughty schoolgirl.

Both men stared at her in shock. “Are we….” Falman began to say. “Yep!” Isaac answered. Izzie wanted them to fight over her heart and body. As a little bit below their standards as it seemed, the challenge was actually a hot one! Then, they figured out the obvious thing to do next. The men were to fight over this maiden’s heart and claim it as their own. “So,” Isaac spoke up. “You up for the challenge?” Vato thought about that for a moment. Then he smiled and said, “She’s going to be mine!” Jakob’s older brother smiled back at his new rival. “You wish!” he replied. Then, the men shook on their unspoken agreement. “May the best man win!” Vato said aloud. “Absolutely!” Isaac spoke back. That moment started the lusty triangle love game!

Edward and Kelli were walking along the path to the Maple Gaming Club. They had gotten close to each other along the way. Kelli was down in Amestris for a music and gaming convention. She was with her friends over the weekend. The alchemist was secretly plotting how to get her to drop her panties for him later when they got into a private place at the Maple Gaming Club. He would succeed with his plan if he played all of his cards right. “Strange,” Ed cut in at one point. “You don’t strike me as a video game freak.” Kelli smiled at him innocently. “That’s what all of the guys say about me,” she replied. “But I am!” Edward watched his soon-to-be-fling with loving eyes. “She’s so cute!” he thought happily. “This is going to be too easy!” Yes, my friend! She’ll be all yours in minutes! Just don’t screw up! [Oh, I won’t! Trust me!]

Edward and Kelli made it to the Maple Gaming Club within thirty minutes. The place was fully lit up. People were coming in and out of the building. The alchemist’s lady friend walked up to the entry. “Well,” she said. “I’ve enjoy our walk. I wish there could be some way to repay you!” Edward kept watching her. Then, the girl thought about her last offer for a moment. She smiled wickedly when she reached a conclusion. “Tell you what,” Kelli spoke up. “I’ll meet you in the parking lot at nightfall and ‘thank’ you personally. Sound good?” Edward nodded happily. “Yes!” he called out. His lady friend smiled at him gingerly. “Great!” she replied. “I’ll see you in the parking lot!” Then, Kelli went into to join her friends in the convention. Edward watched her leave in excitement. Well, what are you waiting for? Get there now! [Right!] Then, the horny alchemist hurried all the way to the back parking lot to wait for Kelli again.

Addi was having the day off downtown. She was enjoying the nice day outside the Activity Center. Hunter was watching her from the inside of the kid’s room. He had trying for days now to try and get close to either Izzie or Addi. But sadly every time he tried, something would get in the way and distract him. This time seemed perfect to draw Addi to him. “Now’s my chance!” he thought in joy. Then, the boy straightened himself up some and headed out to his eye of affection. Addi was looking up at the sky when she looked out of the corner of her eye and saw Hunter. The sergeant couldn’t help but smile at herself. “Well, well!” she thought to herself. “Here he comes again!” The Irish boy sat down next to his crush. Addi turned to him smiling. “Hello again,” she said. “Hey!” Hunter said back. Silence passed between for a short second. The Irish boy stared deeply into his crush’s deep bluish-green eyes. “She is so hot!” he thought. “Well, here goes! It’s now or never!” The boy took in a deep breath and announced, “I like you, Addi! I really like you and want to go out with you!” Hunter waited for a response. “Please say yes! Please say yes!” he thought over and over again. Addi smiled at him tenderly. Then she leaned in close and lightly brushed his cheek with her finger tips. The sergeant couldn’t help but to smile at her crush. “I know,” she replied softly. “And you took your time saying it.” Then, she lightly kissed him on the tip of his neck and walked away. Hunter sat there confused. “What just… happened?” he thought. “Did she know all along? Does she even feel the same?” Still lost, the boy rose to his feet and slowly walked back into the Activity Center.

Night had fallen. The gaming and music freaks were inside partying now. Edward waited for his lady friend in excitement. The dragon in his soul was ready to eat! They both kept counting down the seconds to sexual bliss. But soon, something would interfere and ruin everything. In the late hours, Kelli came swaying over to him sexually. Ed wasn’t sure if he was dreaming or not. He just couldn’t take her eyes off of her. Kelli made her way right over to him. The boy’s organ became hard as she walked closer to him. His lady friend made it right over to the alchemist. She grinned at him like a naughty kitty. “My,” the girl said aloud when she saw the bulge in his pants. “It looks like someone came prepared!” Ed’s face became a bright red. Kelli giggled at him tenderly. “Too stunned to speak?” she asked. The alchemist could barely speak. His lady friend smiled at him again. “Here,” she replied. “Let me fix that for you!” Then, Kelli leaned forward and lightly kissed him on the lips. That loosened Edward up really quickly. He kissed back in a flash. The heat began to rise with each kiss that they shared. Ed reached right to her skirt and tried to roll it up to her waist. The girl stopped him in the rush. Edward stopped kissing her and looked up as if ask her, “Why did you stop me?” The girl smiled at him tenderly. “Hold on,” she replied. Kelli then reached into her pocket and drove out her car key. She took Edward over to her car and unlocked it. The gaming girl leapt into the back seat on her back. The alchemist grinned to himself as he put two and two together. “Okay then!” he thought in excitement. Edward quickly leapt into the car, climbed on top of Kelli, and closed the car behind them.

The couple began making out in a fiery storm of desire. The dragon sat back in silence and smiled at the foreplay. Edward could barely keep his hands off of her. He just *had* to touch her in anyway! Yes! Feed me all you want! Everything seemed to be flying high to the island in the sky until his conscience finally began to rebel. Edward had his hands at Kelli’s shirt when he began to see the Sweet Orange hooker’s strangled throat with the red line across it. He froze up at first, but then he started up again. But when the alchemist did so, he began to see her crushed limbs lying lifelessly in the tall grass. Edward quickly sat up trembling nervously. Kelli looked up and noticed the sudden change in the mood. “Ed?” she asked in concern. “What’s wrong?” “Wh-What is this?” the alchemist thought to himself. “Why do I keep seeing her blood in my head?” The boy tried to shake himself out of all these violent thoughts. “N-Nothing!” he said quickly. “I’m fine!” Ed tried to get back in the mood and go for Kelli’s skirt this time. But no sooner had he touched the leather, the sight of the hooker’s blood in her hair and on her sweet orange face came back in his head like a rushing flood. Edward froze up again trembling and pale. He could see the blows to her chest in his head just as clear as the first time. The dragon was getting annoyed by this hold ups. What the hell is the matter with you, you idiot? Get over it and get on with screwing this girl! Its host couldn’t obey or move at all. He just sat there sick and froze with fear and guilt. The Sweet Orange hooker’s stabbed abdomen was all he could see. Kelli looked at him again. “Uh, are you sure you’re feeling okay, pal?” she asked again in concern. As she asked that, Ed began to see the hooker’s swollen and beaten lips. That was the final crack in the ice.

“I’m so sorry! I can’t do this!” Edward yelled out at last. Kelli looked at him confused. “What do you mean?” she asked with that hot Liverpool tongue of hers. “Why not?” Edward didn’t answer her. He just quickly zipped up his pants, opened the car door, and leapt out of the car in a rush. He stood there panting to himself in worry. His conscience was winning a battle for once. But for how long this time?