Maneater:

Simone’s Notes:

Submissiveness is the incidence or trait of yielding to the expressed will of another person or some display of force. It can be found in everyday human interaction. Submissiveness can be a benign aspect of the social fabric, or it may be part of other problems that a person experiences. Within human relationships there may be a submissive partner. This partner may be trying to appease the other (s) through agreeing to their command. If they are otherwise healthy this partner may be content. If one or both of the people are experiencing chronic, pervasive emotional distress then the relationship or individuals may require reevaluation.

That same night, Edward got a spicy invitation. He found it when he opened the door to his new apartment. The little card fell straight to his feet. Curious, Edward picked it up and looked on it. A kiss print was on the front of it. A wicked smiled curved across the incubus’s lips. “Mya’s lipstick!” he thought happily. He knew what shades his girls all worn. Little Iris’ was a deep black. Mayuka’s were always fun and teenager colors. Santa’s lipstick was rich red. Victoria’s was always light pink. Manami’s was either a rose red or a cotton candy pink. Mya’s and this card’s were a shimmery brown. Edward couldn’t help but to smile at what she had to say tonight. Edward turned over the card. Here is what the message was:

Meet me out in the gardens tonight.

Mya

Edward sailed in bliss now. “Well now,” he thought. “I sure will, Mya!” Then, the alchemist headed right down the hall.

The garden was a nice short trip. The night was heavy and clear. The stars painted the sky gracefully. Those stars were slowly blocked out by high flames in the sky. A wave of heat lightly caressed his face. Edward knew that he was getting close. He followed the light and heat to the center of the garden. The setting was like a tribal council. A huge bonfire was in the heart of all of the action. The incubi and succubi were all sitting around waiting for him. Manami sat before all of them on her throne. They all looked up when Edward came to the party. The fallen princess smiled at his presence.

“Edward!” she exclaimed. “So nice of you to have come.” The incubi walked in smiling himself.

“And what is this occasion?” he asked. Manami was still eyeing him lustfully.

“It’s party in your honor,” she answered. Edward’s eyes lit up happily.

“Really?” he asked.

“Yes,” she replied. “You have proved yourself well to me. Now you will be repaid.” She turned to the succubi. “Bring him the prize!” the fallen princess ordered. The girls disappeared to the back. Edward watched on in excitement. The slave girls returned with a human girl in chains. The alchemist looked at her with hunger in his eyes. This was a juicy prize indeed. She looked about fifteen or sixteen. Light long cinnamon-reddish hair, shiny amber eyes, small sweet shoulders, slender, tall for her age, perfectly full and almost developed breasts, small waist, nice-shaped hips, sweet thick thighs, nice legs, and small tender ankles. She was only dressed in a sheer cloth draped around her body. The girl looked as if she had been crying. She was truly scared out her mind. Edward just couldn’t help but to smile. “Just like the girl Ai-Oni brought me last year!” he thought happily. He found himself really turned on by the situation. The succubi dragged the hostage to him by the chains. She was shoved down on her knees and his feet. The girl looked up at her fate in desperate eyes. Manami cleared her throat. Everyone looked up.

“This is Clare,” the fallen princess sat to Edward. “She is your pet for tonight. You must turn her into your slave tonight for all of us to see!” Edward smiled at that idea.

“I get to play with her some as well?” he asked.

“But of course!” his mistress said. Edward looked at Clare. She really had fear in her sweet amber eyes. Her fear aroused him even more. He leaned in close into the girl’s ear.

“You been make this worth my while!” he hissed. Clare became stiff as a board. Edward smiled at her wickedly. He lightly stroked her hair.

“Aww,” he said softly to her. “What’s a matter? Afraid of me?” The girl nodded at him in silence. Edward kept smiling at her. He lightly put his hand on top of her head. He could see Alex in her eyes. He thought about retrieving his little pet later when he was cured again. But for now, Clare would have to do.

“Aww,” he said again. “Here.” Then the alchemist leaned down and lightly kissed her on the lips. Clare seemed to calm down some. But yet, something in her mind was telling her something wasn’t right. She wanted to get as far away from him as she could. He or something else didn’t seem to want to let her go. Edward held her close to his body. He was running his fingers through her cinnamon-reddish hair. The incubi and succubi were waiting eagerly. They wanted more action. They were starving for it. This was only a skinny appetizer. They hungered for the real meat. They wouldn’t be disappointed.

Once he got her secure, Edward reached up to her robe. He began slowly sliding it off. That brought Clare back into a fearful reality. She began to fear the worse. This was always Edward’s favorite game. Make the pet comfortable and then scare. Repeat whole process until the end. It was all that simple. The robe lightly hit the ground. Edward broke off the kiss to get a good look at his prize. A little bit of drool escaped from his lips. She was just perfect now. He wanted to eat her up right away. Shades of black and red began to appear in his eye. The chains holding her in place added on to her captive charm. The alchemist couldn’t hold back any longer. His fangs grew out in hunger. He yanked off his clothes in a rush. The prize was blushing at him out of surprise. She just couldn’t believe that such a beast could have so much unspeakable beauty to them. Edward grabbed Clare again and kissed her wildly on the lips. Clare felt too weak to fight back. There was nothing that she could do. Nothing she could do but to let him have his way with her.

Edward pinned his prize to the ground. The black and red in his eyes were increasing by each second. The monster had completely taken over his mind. Clare looked up at him in complete terror. Tears began to stream down her pretty little face. The alchemist slowly licked them away. Comfort and fear mixed again in Clare. Thoughts of death flashed into her mind. More tears fell from her eyes.

“No, no,” Edward said to her in her mind. “I’m not going to kill you yet. Where is the fun in that?” Clare was too afraid to speak at all.

“He can hear my thoughts?” she thought.

“Yes,” Ed said in her mind. “And much more!” Clare froze up again. She could feel her heart in her throat. She thought that she would choke. Edward kissed her again on the lips. He held her down by the shoulders. There was no more time to wait. He got to work right on her. The alchemist didn’t even bother to go slow tonight. Oh no! Not tonight! Clare was no Derdra at all. Innocence and forgiveness would not be had. No love for this prize tonight! It was only going to be raw passion and lustful violence. Edward just went powerfully fast with his little prize. He didn’t even wait for the pain to settle down when he broke past her hymn. Clare just had to bear with the brutal that this monster had inflicted upon her. She was in hell tonight indeed. The incubi and succubi watched in intent. This was what they wanted all night. This was real action right here. The succubi became jealous of the prize. They wanted in on the action as well. The incubi wanted to do the prize as well. Manami just sat there and enjoyed the show. She herself was getting turned on. She wanted Edward and Clare for herself afterwards. Her heart raced wildly at that thought.

Edward just kept on with his work. He just kept going faster and faster. Clare just tried to hold down her pain. Even that was beginning to be too much to bear. Edward just couldn’t hold back anymore. The alchemist incubus bit down deep into Clare’s neck. The prize gasped in pain. Edward began drinking wildly. The sweet taste of her blood was driving him insane. He just had to have more. He had neck closer to his mouth for more taste. The sweet drink was making his head feel lighter and lighter. The red and black in his eyes rose even more and spun. The alchemist was falling into a high zone as he drank. Clare herself was falling back weaker and weaker. The other incubi and succubi were watching with lust and desire. They too wanted a taste of Clare’s sweet blood. This was all just torture for their minds. Manami herself was aroused by the show. She too wanted in on the action. Watching was just killing her inside so badly.

Edward finished drinking up Clare when he came within her. He slowly let go of her neck and let her drop into his cold and cruel arms. The incubus looked down at his near-dead prize. Clare was almost letting go of her short life. She looked as pale as snow. Edward just couldn’t help but smile at her helplessness. There was only one thing left to do with her.

Edward bit into his left wrist and neatly placed it at Clare’s mouth. The blood began to spill in. The girl had no choice but to drink. Edward shut his eyes in sweet bliss at the sensation. This was just like with Santa. Only this time, it was much better. It seemed than the younger the girl, the sweeter the blood. Clare was no exception to the rule tonight.

His thoughts were interrupted when Clare began drinking faster. The alchemist’s breath grew heavier and heavier. He himself began to feel light-headed. Edward thought that he was going to faint. The alchemist had to force himself to remain standing. “Oh yes!” the monster thought in complete lust. “This is way better than Santa and the others! The blood just keeps getting better with each one I feast on!” Once the feed was complete, Edward dropped her onto the ground and stared at her. She was just as pale as he was now. The newly made succubus was loosing conscious now. Edward licked the blood off of his lips and swallowed it. As a finishing touch, he decided to make it more interesting. He placed his right hand on the girl’s forward and erased her memory. Let her wake up confused and unaware of her current state. The slaves all applauded and cheered. Manami rose to her feet from her throne.

“Well done, Edward!” she called out. “You have done well. You will be rewarded for completing the ceremony.” Edward just rose to his feet and smiled as he got dressed again.

“Thanks, my mistress!” he called out to her. Then he winked at her. The fallen princess blew a kiss at him. Then, the festivities kicked into high gear. The sea of the fallen was only beginning to flood the city. It was only a matter of time before everyone in the whole city would drown in lust and dark desire.