Innocent Evil:

Simone’s Notes:

The appearance of succubi varies, but in general they are depicted as alluring women with great beauty, often with demonic bat-like wings, and large breasts; they also have other demonic features, such as horns and cloven feet. Occasionally they appear as an attractive woman in dreams that the victim cannot seem to get off his mind. They lure males and in some cases, the male has seemed to fall "in love" with her. Even out of the dream she will not leave his mind. She will remain there slowly draining energy from him until death by exhaustion. Other sources say the demon will steal the male's soul through the act of intercourse. The word succubus has evolved a modern use as a slang misogynistic pejorative, describing a woman who changes the personality of her male sexual partner.

Elle Truman never had so good. She used to be a bright, happy, and beautiful girl. But then, her world was turned upside down. Her mother abandoned her at a young age. Her father was a drunk who brought home many slutty women as girlfriends. He and the women were always abusing her. She had more scars than any stunt rider in the BMX world. At fourteen, she just couldn’t take it anymore. Running away wasn’t an option however. Where could she go? Her father wouldn’t let her go to her grandmother. He beat her so that she wouldn’t run to her for help. So, Elle just took the abuse in silence. But that wasn’t her only problem soon. The girl soon got into drugs.

This first occurred in her freshman year of high school. Elle met a charming young man in her math class and fell madly in love with him. The man didn’t really feel the same and decided to use her for his own personal gain. So Elle and the boy dated for a few weeks. He eventually pressured her to have sex with him. Elle didn’t want to lose the boy so she gave in. This rotten boy also showed her many things. He was the one who introduced her to crystal meth. Elle took it just to impress the boy. Over time, this girl became addicted. The boy that she liked threw her away like she was just useless garbage to him. Elle was really crushed. It drove her deeper into a dark and crushing world. Her father and his sluts didn’t help either. Drugs were her only friends now. Her debts were just as bad as Irene’s. Elle started to surround herself with people that hated her in reality. They all used and abused her. The girl soon turned to prostitution to support her meth habit. That let her be used even more. Her pimp and clients abused her even more. The pimp was the worst. He was even worse than the boy she fell in love with in high school. He used her and then treated her like crap. Elle wished that she could go home at times. But what good would that do? It would just be the same thing in the streets as it was in the run-down apartment in the Red Light District she was living in now. Elle was just a prisoner in her miserable life with people who hated and used her to their benefits.

Then, one fateful night on August tenth, Elle’s life changed completely. She was walking the streets in the Red Light District when three thugs approached her. The girl watched them in fear. She knew who they were. These were the three guys she got her meth from. They wanted their money. Ella was really worried now. The young addict would use every excuse in the book to explain why she didn’t have the money on time. She kept telling them that the money was coming as soon as she could get it. They seemed to take it so well with her words. But tonight, they seemed to have had enough. The thugs made it right up to her.

“Hi… guys…” she said nervously. The head thug walked up to her.

“We want our money, bitch!” he snapped.

“I told you I’d get you money when I could,” she replied. “My pimp takes most of my money!”

“Aw, boo-hoo-hoo!” the second thug said. “It’s always the same thing with you!”

“Give us the money!” the third thug barked. Elle was running out of options and excuses really fast. She really didn’t know what to do now.

“Listen guys,” she insisted. “Promise I’ll get you the money as soon as I can!” The thugs weren’t feeling her at all tonight.

“Oh for the love of god!” the leader yelled out. “Shut up! One more word out of mouth and you’re going to get it!”

“But…!” Elle began again anyway. That pissed all three of them off.

“I said shut up!” the leader barked. Then he violently punched her in the stomach. Elle fell to the ground screaming in pain. The leader kept kicking her while she was down. The other two thugs joined in quickly. Elle begged and cried for them to stop. But they just kept beating on her. They even began stabbing her to insure that she would die tonight. The drug dealers just beat her up until she was almost dead. The leader smirked at the dying hooker.

“That’s one last debt to worry about!” he said aloud. Then the thugs walked away into night laughing. That was the end of Elle Truman. She was only twenty-two years old.

Enter, Azrael. He had seen the whole thing from across the street. The incubus saw a great opportunity. Even though the meth use had taken her beauty away, Azrael saw a gorgeous succubus in her. Right then, he knew that he just had to have her. When the thugs were gone, Azrael made his way over to the dying whore. He smiled wickedly at her.

“Well hello there, love,” he said to her. Elle just stared at him with wide blank eyes. The incubus got a good look at the dying woman’s life through her eyes. She was just wrecked with tragedy to this point. Azrael smiled at her wickedly. “Oh yes!” he thought. “She’ll do just fine!”

“You want revenge on everyone that has ever hurt you in your life, don’t you?” he asked her aloud. Elle was slowly going out, but she understood every single word that he was saying. She saw him as a savior. The dying woman tried to answer yes to him right away. Azrael lightly put his finger to her still warm lips.

“Shhh,” he replied. Elle stopped trying to talk. The incubus just smiled at her calmly.

“Okay then,” he said. “Then I’ll give it to you here.” Then he knelt down to her and lightly took her into his strong cold arms. He moved her neck to his mouth and bit down deep. Elle gasped aloud. Azrael began drinking her blood. The girl didn’t even bother to fight back. She was actually… in bliss! This was better meth, alcohol, and sex combine. Elle shut her eyes tightly. Azrael began to suck harder and faster. Her blood was like bitter wine to him. The meth ruined her blood some. But, the incubus didn’t really care. Blood was blood to him. It was the best thing next to sex for him. He was happy that the harvest was finally here. Any longer and he would’ve lost it.

At long last, Azrael lightly let go of Elle. He looked down at the whore. She was pale with death now. The incubus smiled at her wickedly. He was half-way finished now. Next came the work. Azrael bit down hard on his arm and held it to Elle’s mouth. The cold black blood slowly slid down her throat. Elle began to drink up that way. Azrael shut his eyes in bliss. This was also one of the best parts of blood-drinking. The exchange itself was just better than sex. Elle began to drink faster as she slowly regained her strength. Azrael moaned in deep bliss. “Oh yes!” he thought. “You’ll make a perfect succubus!” Afterwards, Elle passed out in his arms. Azrael lightly stroked her long blonde hair as he smiled to himself wickedly. He got his fix for the night. This wasn’t the usual tonight. This was a special night. Elle was special. He gave her almost all of his blood to her. He wanted her to be a powerful succubus. He wanted her strength to match her beauty as well. Then, the monster picked up the new monster and carried her off in the night.

By sunrise, Elle slowly awoke. The succubus found herself in a small apartment bedroom. It looked more like a college dorm. The ceiling slanted heavily to her right. Some pornographic photos were all over the walls. Everything was a dim blue. Elle was in slight confused. But that just wasn’t all. She noticed that something was different about her. “Am I… dead?” she thought.

“No,” a voice answered her. “Not in a physical sense.” Elle looked up quickly. Azrael was standing in the bedroom doorway. The young succubus was overjoyed and confused.

“So,” she began again. “What am I now?” Azrael smiled and walked closer to her.

“Your own woman, now!” he replied. Elle looked at him surprised.

“What do you mean?” she asked confused. The incubus just smiled at her and showed her a mirror on the small closet door. Elle looked at it shocked. She slowly climbed out of bed to get a better look. The girl staring back at her looked pretty healthy. She had long clean beautiful hair to her shoulders. Her eyes were a beautiful ocean blue. The girl’s face was full again. Her curves and weight were back as well. Elle couldn’t believe what she was seeing. She was used to seeing a sick, pale, skinny girl staring back at her. But now, this sexy new image of herself was a real shocker. Even the fallen mark on her right shoulder looked like a sultry tattoo on her. Elle just couldn’t believe what she was seeing.

“Is that… me?!?” she asked in surprise.

“Yes,” Azrael replied. “I gave you a second chance!” Elle just couldn’t believe. A man she barely knew gave her a second chance on her life. She just couldn’t speak at all. The new succubus just leapt forward and hugged her fellow slave happily. Azrael just smirked to himself as he shook his head.

“Oh yeah,” he said. “You’ll no longer have a need for meth anymore. I have cleaned it all out of your body and taken away your desire and cravings for it. So you truly are a free woman.” Elle looked up at him with big tear-filled eyes.

“Oh, I wish I knew your name so that I can thank you!” she breathed out happily. Azrael just smiled at her wickedly.

“Just call me Azrael,” he replied. Elle looked at him with even more happiness.

“Oh Azrael,” she said to him. “Thank you! Thank you so much!”

“Yeah,” he said. “Just go and kill the thugs that tried to kill you. You know exactly where they are, girl!” Elle nodded to him quickly.

“Right!” she said strongly. Then, she let go of him and headed out the door. Azrael watched after her smiling. “Do real good, girl!” he thought. Then, he sat on the bed and had smoke.

Elle came on the outside of the city to this abandoned apartment complex. She went over the little map in her head. “Third floor, room 306,” the succubus thought. She smiled to herself confidently. Then, she made her way inside. The succubus took the back stairs to avoid any attention to herself. She was surprised to find that she had new strength and speed while climbing up the stairs. In the old days, Elle would get tired just climbing up the first flight. “This is amazing!” she thought. The woman made it up to the third floor in no time. She had the knife they had left on the ground by her dying body in her jacket. She smiled to herself wickedly. Elle pushed open the door and walked through it. The hall was dark and smelled really bad. Cigarettes and cheap liquor filled the air. Elle smiled to herself wickedly. She found the apartment in seconds. The former hooker knocked on the door gracefully.

“Coming!” a voice yelled at her. Elle reached into her jacket and slowly drew out the knife. Payback was long overdue. The door opened wide. The one of the thug looked right at her. He didn’t seem to recognize her at all at first. Elle smiled at him sweetly. The thug seemed attracted to her.

“Yes, ma’am?” he asked. “Can I help you?” Elle kept smiling at him, drew out the knife, and stabbed him to death violently. Death was instant in seconds. The succubus looked at the dead man smiling. “Pig!” she thought. But then, something caught her attention. She saw blood on the blade of the knife. This was normal, only… she seem intrigued. Elle took the blade to her lips and licked it. A strange sensation came over her. The blood actually… tasted good! Right then, she knew that she had have more! Elle walked past the dead body to the other two. She found the thugs in the kitchen arguing over money. They didn’t notice her until they heard footsteps stop in the kitchen. Both men were confused on why a hot-looking woman was standing in the kitchen.

“Who invited her?” the thug whispered to his boss.

“I don’t know!” the other one hissed. “Just get rid of her.”

“Yes, boss,” his friend replied. He rose from his chair and walked over to her. Elle smiled at him wickedly. “Right where I want him!” she thought coldly. The thug approached her calmly.

“Okay, darling,” he said to her. “This is drug deal cut, so we’re gonna have to ask you to—“STAB! Elle stabbed in him deep in the chest and bit down hard in the neck. The thug gasped aloud in pain. Elle drank him up quickly. Her victim died right before her in seconds. The succubus let go of him and let him fall to the floor at his feet. She smirked at him coldly.

“Two down!” Elle announced. Then, she turned her attention to the leader of the pack. He was looking very terrified. Elle walked closer to him.

“Hm, funny!” she said aloud. “You seemed much more macho when you killed me last night!” The drug dealer looked at her confused.

“What do you mean?” he asked in fear. Those were his last words! Elle rushed forward, stabbed him multiple times, and bit down violently hard on his neck. She drank him dry. The thug tried to cry out for help, but it was to no avail. Elle had silenced him really good. When she was finished, the succubus dropped him right on the ground at her feet. A wicked smile came across her face at her blood red work. Who knew revenge and blood tasted so sweet? Elle came across a huge realization. “I want some more!” she thought in happy shock. Azrael was watching from outside of the apartment building. He was smiling to himself wickedly. “Yes,” he thought. “I know you do!”